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Aes Sedai Brown Sister by *Sunstone72:iconSunstone72:


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Submitted: November 25, 2006
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Something that I'm still working on but have come to a bit of a grinding halt due to lack of knowledge. Once again a cut and paste job. I really want to move past the 'cut & paste' side of things and learn how to give it a more artistic feel. I would really appreciate ANY constructive criticism. Please be nice - I am still learning. ;)

This image is a Brown Sister (Aes Sedai) of the White Tower, based on the Robert Jordan book series 'Wheel of Time'.

Thanks to the following for their incredible stock:

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Ooo I like .. really nice cosy warm feeling to this .... I feel it works really well the colours and stuff all mach .. your shadows are cool and convincing, stock chosen well for the lighting :) the only thing I could say to improve it would be to soften some of the edges round the lady .. I think the right hand edge would be ok it looks fine but I feel her front or the left hand edges need to be softenined a lil they look a lil too crisp :)

Hope the tip comes in handy :) cool dev great WIP and thanks for the stock usage and heads up .. keep up the fine work :)

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Thanks so much. I really appreciate your comments :hug: Yes, can see now that the left edge of the lady needs to be softened more. Thank you, thank you :kiss:
Ooo and I love the border too .. :) glad the tip cn be of use for you

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You wouldn't believe how useful! It's hard being in the country with no support other than that on the web!
LOL even if there was support in Oz then you'd still probably get more useful info off fellow artists on the net

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LOL

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lol, its certianly not a Verin Sedai, but i like it

to my untrained eye it looks pretty good, so i can't really give you any Critique other than keep going, keep learning, because from what i see your pretty good at putting concept into image

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LOL! Thank you so much :blowkiss:

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